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PLEASE STOP CAPITALIZING WORDS!

Thursday, August 28th, 2008

We are in love with capital letters. One of the most consistent style problem I encounter is the tendency to capitalize anything that the writer believes is important.

These important words are no longer just proper names or countries. They include words like Internet, Email and terms like Strategic Planning and Gross Profits.

Im not a nit-picky editor (nit picky editors dont use terms like nit picky). Its not the rules about capitalization that Im going to quote here. I change capital letters to lower case because of the problems they cause with style consistency.

As soon as you start capitalizing everything in sight, it becomes impossible to be consistent (for example, if you capitalize Gross Profits, do you capitalize regular profits? And what about losses?)

My advice is stick to the good old rules of style and grammar. Capitalize proper names, names of places and titles. If you are in doubt, refer to any style guide. As your final check, do not capitalize words just because you think they are important. Put them in bold face, or italics. Or better yet, write so that your reader instinctively believes they are important.

Beth Parker
Professional Writer
www.bethparker.com

President, CAWEE
Canadian Association of Women Executives & Entrepreneurs
June 2008-June 2010

Made up words and other wordsmith irritations

Friday, July 4th, 2008

Walla and other mysterious non words

There are many professions you cannot practice without a license. Writing isnt one of them. Anyone can put words on a page and they do without any regard as to whether or not the meaning, let alone the metaphors, actually make any sense.

I was reading a proposal the other day and reached the part where the writer wanted to express a magical moment when suddenly her particular service made a magical difference peoples lives. Walla!

Walla? At first I thought it was some Australian term, perhaps an animal related to the Platypus? Somewhere in the back of my mind I knew what she was really trying to say.

It came to me soon enough.

Voila!

It is the French word for look there! but usually used in English when you require the idea of presto, suddenly or “there it is”.

It might have taken me months to figure it out. Fortunately, I didnt waste that much time on it.

Suddenly I knew what she was talking about.

Walla.